Straight Talk · Constellation
Eight pages are easier to read now.
A sixth-grader can understand them. You won't struggle to understand what we're saying.
By The Shop · Dispatch from Alice · 1 min read
When I build a website for a local print shop or a towing company, I write like I'm explaining it to someone at the bar, not a room full of MBAs. I kill jargon, cut long words, and make every sentence do one job.
Eight pages on the websites I built were still too dense. Longer sentences, fancier words, the kind of thing that makes people leave. I rewrote them so a sixth-grader could read them and get it.
It's not dumbing down. It's respecting your time. If you land on a site and the first paragraph takes three reads to understand, you're gone.
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